TWO DIffREnT pLaCes

I want to tell you about two diffrent places we visited in Secondlife.We are the third group.The first place we visited there are a sea and a shore with yellow sands.The trees have pink flowers.It is like a holiday place,while the other one is not so.The second one is like a village not as luxirious as the first one.The first one has some white houses and every aspects of the houses have windows.There are also some entertaintment places.At night it is much more funny.But in the second place there are some houses which are like a village home.Their roofs are red and walls are very ordinary.Now,I want to tell you about their similarities,both of the places have sea.In both there are some sort of sea side.Both have palm trees.The second one has a forest,nevertless it is not as appealing as the first one.

Fog covers everywhere.It is along river,where it rolls among aits and green meadows.The river flows defiled among the tiers of shipping and the water problems of a huge city.Fog is over the
Essex's swamp.Fog is on the Kentish hills.Fog slides into cabooses of collierbrigs.Fog covers the yards and hovers in the rigging of great ships.Fog drops on the gunwales of barges and small boats.Fog is in the eyes.Fog is in the throats of ancient Greenwich pensioners.It wheezes by the firesides of their ward.Fog is in the stem,in the bowl of the afternoon pipe of the wrathful skipper.Fog is in his close cabin.It cruelly pinches the toes and fingers of his shievering little prentice boy on deck.Change people are on the bridges.They peep over the parapets into a nether sky of fog.Fog is all around them as if they were up in a baloon.

Thesis Statement:To me although lots of us like downloading software programs and other things from internet without giving any money.It is not legal.
Supporting sentences:
1-The creators of the songs and other things which we download are all gaining their life from this job.If we download their works from internet they can't gain much.We shouldn't forget that they have also have a family.
2-With their art works we are enjoying ourselves.It is not right to steal their output.
Oponent İdea:According to some downloading is suitable and acceptable .Because turkish people don't spend much money on entertainment.

tHe JoB I waNtED

I think a job should permit me to have time with my family.The money is of course important but we have approximately 60 years life so the money is not everything.The important thing is to have happy time with your dears.I always wanted to be teacher.Still ,I want to be a teacher.I think it is the true job for me so that I both have time to be with my husband and children and have enough money to pay for some necessities.It may not be enough for us but my husband may work much more than me because a father can work for hours .I dont think a mother's working for hours is not right .The children should find her at home when they come home from school .But for father the situation is a bit diffrent.He also should be with his family.But he should earn much more than his wife.Because he is the family's leader.So ,I want a job with little money but happy family life.